Words Hurt
by tenebrious on Jun 14
Wasted words and tortured souls
Filling ears with pains untold
Bury it deep inside yourself
Keep it from view of someone else
Nothing can take away the pain you feel
Although no one else believes it's real
Your nothing to anyone you're overlooked
Your life is nothing but what's forsook
Put on a smile and put on a big show
So that your dying inside no one will know
Someday all this will be in the past
All ends in silence from a shotgun blast
If your dead they can't hurt you anymore
No one will miss you that's for sure
No one knows what's in your head
It's sad it will be to late when your dead
by tenebrious on Jun 14
Wasted words and tortured souls
Filling ears with pains untold
Bury it deep inside yourself
Keep it from view of someone else
Nothing can take away the pain you feel
Although no one else believes it's real
Your nothing to anyone you're overlooked
Your life is nothing but what's forsook
Put on a smile and put on a big show
So that your dying inside no one will know
Someday all this will be in the past
All ends in silence from a shotgun blast
If your dead they can't hurt you anymore
No one will miss you that's for sure
No one knows what's in your head
It's sad it will be to late when your dead
14 comments:
Brilliant.
What a waste!
naalu nimishathule ivlo contrasting opinionsa..hmmm....
Archana,
Poignant. On a lighter vein, here's a different take:
Monalisa's smile
Priya.
nice poem. thnx for putting it up for us..
touching...really touching! believe me, i could find that "you" is myself in some of the lines!
loved ur poem,
but i guess isn't it too poignant for poem written by a dame...
there is somebody very very interested in knowing a little bit more about you
will contact you when he has the guts to do so....hopefully soooooon
come'on machan. do it.
Wish you really understood it yourself! Words do hurt!So use them carefully!!
germinal dreamer : Why would it be too poignant to be written by a woman ?
General comment: I respect people wanting to remain anonymous while commenting - but I wish I had names to associate the comments with...
Impressive
thought provoking
thought provoking
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